Saturday 13 October 2007

13 - Oct - 2007

My ideas of how i feel the story should go.

Caught Short


The scene starts in an enclosed busy high street. Steven like most men is in a rush when shopping, when suddenly the erg to pee hits him. He looks round frantically to see queues in every direction for the toilets. Running through the streets, Steven spots an ally way in the distance. Whilst running through the crowds with his legs crossed, he bumps into a pedestrian who is just about to enjoy his lunch which is rudely thrown across the paving by his feet, which is to be trodden on and kicked through the rabble.


As Steven reaches the ally and unzips himself to reveal all, a decrepit old lady walks passed and stops. Turns to face him and shakes her head in disbelief to what he is about to do in clear daylight. Acting as natural as can be with your tackle in your hands, Steven slowly turns his back to the lady, zips up all coy and walks calmly further into the depths of the ally way. Once satisfied with the location, he stops and lets rip all over the wall, spraying patterns and designs into the graffiti which happens to be facing him on the spot he has chosen.


Steven shakes off and gets himself in place. As he starts to walk back, a can hits him directly in the back of his head. He throws his body round in one swift movement to have not a soul in his vision for miles. Although he has noticed that the ally has changed ever so slightly. The graffiti in which he had violated has vanished out of sight. He turns to walk back again when to his surprise the graffiti monster is standing on the wall directly beside him. Steven panics, looks around and sees an opening in the wall. He runs for his life through the opening into a long winding passage. A chase between him and the monster arises. The passage is filled with all kinds of obstacles (rubbish bins, bikes, crates, etc) in which Steven stumbles and collides with.
As he looses sight of the beast, Steven stops to grab his breathe. All of a sudden a massive clash appears and Steven is thrown into a pile of bins. Dazed by the blast Steven is unable to move and is left helpless to the monsters very whim. Whilst down a sound of a zip lowering occurs and all of a sudden a flood of colour sprays all over Steven as if he was being peed on. The colour covers him from head to toe making him look as if he were a drownt rat. Sopping wet he gets thrown out of the ally onto his arse into the crowd, left to run down the street away from the beast scared.


Credits


Finale – Their will be a long shot of the ally and shadow of the beast is seen moving back into it (Just a silhouette). Shortly after, another character holding his crutch as if to pee is seen entering the ally as if it is all to start over again.

End

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